Caligula's Launderette

My two cents worth - In her loosely braided blonde hair, small peridot butterflies were woven in. Her matching dress... or In her loosely braided blonde hair, small peridot butterflies ...

Their advanced technology, like Ireland before the beer Is created over and over in the square of life (Birth, school, work, death) - That is genius right there Liz! Brava!

Hmmm... I like the rhyme and the simplicity. Structurally too many commas methinks, maybe - Fragrance beauty: tender red, in lines 3-5 because of the run-on it is hard to ...

I think this goes here... Rated for Language - I am not so sure on the fragmented beginning. All comments, suggestions, welcome. As for the title is comes from two ...

Welcome hon! Around here I go by CL or Cal, and feel free to PM me for anything... but I have yet to write some romantic poem about a cowboy ...

Tigana , The Lions of Al-Rassan and The Sarantine Mosaic by Guy Gavriel Kay. Kay is an absolutely immense author: if you're into historical fiction, read him, because they're all ...

I voted Walk the Line, but besides that Kung Fu Hustle was an excellent film.

Welcome, I'm CL! If you have any questions or just to chat, feel free to PM me or Areida or any of the wonderful mods and admins here (as Areida ...

Sharpe Series by Bernard Cornwell - Most definetly agreed, haven't finished the entire series yet though. They just finished filming Sharpe's Challenge ... 3) Harry Potter series by whats her ...

Well on first thought Abby is... vampiric, but then I thought about what you said in your disclaimer, and that spawned some interesting thoughts. or she has some real Freudian ...

Lovely little piece here, I love the parrellel between your words and the Abby's fear. As for the 'always dark, never dawn' question, I have a few theories brewing in ...

Note: This was the first draft I posted, continue down to the edited version. This is what spawned Shadow Kin , which is here somewheres... all comments, suggestions, crits welcome. ...

You've got my attention... very subtle at the end m'dear. I have to disagree with Poor_Imp on the usage of 'Aye'. Althought it is a very nautical term, it is ...

I'll be looking forward too it, hon. Can't resist a good historical fiction... "topgallant" is indeed a spiffy word... Her mainmast topgallant pierced the bottom of the merging rain clouds, ...

I actually have no idea, wow loosing my memory in my old age... I think it was probably a internet search for writing clubs. But as Jack stated 'And it ...